Chapter 14 of 22 from James Patterson

Ending The Book

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We've all read great books with terrible endings. Of the infinite possible endings, learn how James chooses the right one.

Topics include: What the ending needs • Plant seeds along the way • Favorite book endings • Don’t shy from ambiguity • Think of alternate endings • Analyze your favorites • The secret to great endings

We've all read great books with terrible endings. Of the infinite possible endings, learn how James chooses the right one.

Topics include: What the ending needs • Plant seeds along the way • Favorite book endings • Don’t shy from ambiguity • Think of alternate endings • Analyze your favorites • The secret to great endings

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Set out to write a best-selling book

James Patterson, the author of 19 consecutive No. 1 New York Times bestsellers, reveals his tricks of the trade for the very first time. In this course, he guides you through every part of the book writing process.

22 lessons totaling 3+ hours of video from James covering everything from starting your outline to getting published.

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Peggy H.

This makes the best since to me. James explains stuff that we know but don't realize. Learn so much in a short time.

Lee

He stress the point to go for the reader as if he/she is sitting across from u as the reader.

George T.

I have struggled with endings. In A token for a Host, A novel from The Pleiades Chronicles, my challenge was to have a logical ending that introduces the next one. The last thing I need is to have pissed-off readers, yet, my stories must go on, therefore, I have had to create endings with a twist that provides a certain finality to the book then tells the reader; by the way, in the next book, there's more.

Tyra M.

Wow! Really enjoyed this one. I find myself replaying the lessons and seeing in my WIP where improvements need to be made, and that I'm also doing things right (here and there, lol). Right now my printer is broken (we're waiting on the part, it's delayed). So I'm finding it difficult to get work done (my process involves me printing off the chapters and then doing the assignments, this is my process, and so far every attempt I've made to change it, has stopped me writing). Mr. Patterson has a lot of passion and knowledge. I think whom ever selected the authors for these courses should get an award.

Melissa R.

I enjoyed this because endings are important. But what I find challenging as a writer and a reader is what Dan Brown calls the Muddle in the middle. I've put down or flipped to the end of books because they got bogged down. So that's why James' ideas about always keeping the action moving is important.

Francesca A.

Thank you, James Patterson for this lesson! I've read a lot of books with so so endings and there is one particular author that, for some reason (perhaps torture LOL), has the most crappy endings. I wonder how he got published and how he wound up on the best seller list! But I love his books, despite the endings! He's passed on now so I can't write to him about it. The same is true for movies. We get invested in the plot and characters and the ending sucks! That's the worst! I think that's why I pay so much attention to the endings in my work to make sure they are good. :)

Joe

I love the idea that the ending can (and probably will!) change over the course of the process. And the tip about writing out a bunch of possibilities, each more insane than the previous version, is great too. It makes the prospect of writing a good ending less foreboding and even a little fun. Another great lesson and another tool going in the toolbox!

Teresa V.

Hi, I saw the movie Puzzle. I didn't like the ending. Thought it was ambiguous.

Joseph G.

50% of your endings are not the ending you wrote in your outline ... I'm thinking maybe some chapters in the outline change a bit too as your story develops, and takes some twists and turns ...

Luke

Hello James, I have not posted anything about my book series on here because I am scared of someone stealing the idea. It is a three book series but I would really like you advice, personal advice. I started writing this book series after my surgery, getting my skull removed because I am stuck at home. I know you most likely don't reads these but if you do by chance, read this. Can you please contact me, it would mean the world to me. Thank you, and remember (Science fiction isn't about making things up, but making things real :) I already copyrighted the title and cover of the book.

Transcript

Your ending is hugely important because-- and this is true in movies, and it's true in books-- because that's what they walk-- they walk out of the theater here. They're clapping, and cheering, and feeling great, and spreading the word about the movie, or rather their apartments or whatever in terms of the book. And a lot of it has to do with what you did at the ending, how you pulled it all together, the surprise at the end, the surprise that fits, that's appropriate. So you really have to make sure that it is satisfying, or you're going to disappoint people. And you'll won't get that good word of mouth. You might not get published because there's no ending. It's not just you. It's you and a reader, and I want you to always think about that, because when there is a reader in the process, it's a different thing. The reader's sitting across from you, and you're playing this game. You're playing this cat and mouse game with that reader. And the other important thing about that reader is, you have to go for the highest common denominator. I mean, if you're going to write a best seller, there has to be common denominator. It's got to work for a lot of people. But you want to write for the highest common denominator. It's a really good thriller reader. It's a really good mystery reader. Because you have to satisfy that person. If you satisfy that personal, you're going to satisfy everybody else. [MUSIC PLAYING] It is rare. I'll do the outlines, and I'm preaching outline, outline, outline. I almost never do the ending that's in the outline. Well, at least more than 50% of the time, it's a different ending. Because just in writing the book, so much has changed. So many things have happened. The stakes get bigger, and bigger, and bigger. The villain gets more interesting. Something may have happened to the hero along the line that was a little unexpected. And the ending that I write in the outline is never-- and I think part of the problem is, the outline is a bit more logical than emotional. And by the time I get to that ending, my emotions are really churning, and I'm always feeling it just needs more. It needs more than this. It just can't be about logic. It has to be logic and emotion. You've got to feel something in most cases, certainly in commercial fiction. You should feel something. You should-- and whether it's a tragic ending in which you go, oh, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no. That can be incredibly effective and appropriate. I can't believe, oh, my god. I got to tell people. Oh, Jesus. That's good. That's a good thing. Happy ending, once again, that can be terrific, if it's honest, where that reader or the person in the movie's going oh, shit, man, that's, oh, yeah, baby, yeah. That's good. That's a good thing. [MUSIC PLAYING] The ending should be really satisfying...