Chapter 15 of 24 from Malcolm Gladwell

Tone and Voice

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Malcolm explains how to calibrate your tone for your readership using examples from his book David and Goliath and his own public speaking Q&As.

Topics include: Don’t Serve Your Ego • Manage the Audience With Tone • Mold Your Voice Based on Audience and Subject • Move Between Different Forms • Practice: Exchange Emails With Other Writers

Malcolm Gladwell

Malcolm Gladwell Teaches Writing

In 24 lessons, the author of Blink and The Tipping Point teaches you how to find, research, and write stories that capture big ideas.

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If someone's a jerk, you can pick it up in their writing. Pay attention and you're like, oh, I really don't want to hang out with this person. [INAUDIBLE] eye on their own supply. Or sometimes writers who, they insert themselves gratuitously into stories, and you're like, that is just not, you know, did you really-- are you really that-- do you really think you're that important that you have to-- they'll talk about some incredibly consequential thing and then they'll just start talking about their own-- something that happened in their own lives and it's not equivalent. And you're like-- you know-- so you're coming-- your listener is assessing not just what you're saying, but who you are. So you can't get away with-- you can no more get away with being obnoxious or egotistical or self-indulgent in a piece of writing than you can in a conversation. There's no difference, right? You can't hide your personality when you write. It comes out loud and clear. I read a piece recently-- I won't say where. It was about this controversy at some fraternity. And the writer-- it was really clear to me the writer had-- they had about 5,000-- 4,000 words of material, and they wanted to write a long story. So they handed in 8,000 words, and the rest was just padding. They took a trip, and the trip-- and visited somebody, interviewed someone. And the interview wasn't terribly interesting. Didn't add to the story. And they didn't do anything with it, that made me happy to go down that digression. They just wanted to prove that they had flown all the way to California to talk to this person. And I resented it. It's like, I don't care if you went to California. I know you want to show-- the writer wanted desperately to show readers that they had done their homework. I went to California. I went to Pennsylvania. I read this report. That was, like, loud and clear in the piece. Time and time again, we were reminded just how hard the writer worked. We don't want to know-- we don't care. We assume-- I assume you worked hard. Of course you did. But you don't have to-- don't waste my time on 800 words on your California trip that turned out to be a total waste of time and money, right? It's just-- so there's that-- the writer wasn't thinking about how they were coming across. They were so anxious to make this kind of-- they were so insecure about their status as a writer that they ended up like going on these digressions that had no-- I don't want to say had no function, because digressions don't have to have a function. They just have to be interesting, right? It wasn't interesting. It was just serving the kind of troubled ego, fragile ego of the writer. [MUSIC PLAYING] Invariably in a public speaking event, there's a Q&A. And Q&As are very difficult. They're difficult because you're essentially selecting a random sample of people and allowing them-- giving them the floor. So some people ask-- don't ask-- some people just go on forever....

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Ketchup. Crime. Quarterbacks. Thanks to Malcolm Gladwell, these ordinary subjects have helped millions of readers devour complex ideas like behavioral economics and performance prediction. Now, the renowned storyteller and best-selling author of Blink and The Tipping Point is teaching his craft online for the first time. Write stories that captivate by learning how Malcolm researches topics, crafts characters, and distills big ideas into simple, powerful narratives.

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Malcolm Gladwell

Malcolm Gladwell Teaches Writing