From David Mamet's MasterClass

Narration & Exposition

Writing drama is not the same as conveying information. A dramatist's job is to entertain, not bore, the audience. Learn how to recognize unnecessary narration and exposition and how to let the audience help you cut it out.

Topics include: Recognizing Narration • Unnecessary Exposition • Cutting Out Excess Narration

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Writing drama is not the same as conveying information. A dramatist's job is to entertain, not bore, the audience. Learn how to recognize unnecessary narration and exposition and how to let the audience help you cut it out.

Topics include: Recognizing Narration • Unnecessary Exposition • Cutting Out Excess Narration

David Mamet

Teaches Dramatic Writing

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Drama has nothing to do with information. Drama is storytelling that assembles the clan. Information is the compiling of facts, which may or may not be useful and also, which may or may not be true. So why would I want to give people information. It's all we do all day-- we get information. Almost all of it's a lie. And even the true stuff we don't act upon, right? Other people's job is to give people information, right? Or in the case of newspapers, misinformation. My job is to tell them a story. Period. It's not my job to be informative. My job is to be interesting. I got a special way of being interesting that pays my rent. It's called writing drama. So I'm just a class clown writing drama. That's what I do for a living. They used to say in the old days in the movie business-- you meet a writer, you say, what do you. He'd say, I write gags and titles. Because that goes back to the silent era. They made up gags and they wrote the titles in silent film. We've all seen a silent film. So the writing of gags is magnificent because if you look at Buster Keaton's films, for example, he's structuring this wonderful progression, which is like a joke, the end of which the gag is surprising and inevitable. So even early talkie days, the hip writers would say, what do you do, they'd say, write gags and titles. Pick up a phrase from the old days. The other thing about titles, which is interesting to me in black and white films is that none of them are necessary. If you take every one out of every black and white film, changes nothing. But the tradition of writing titles exists today in the unfortunate tradition of conveying information. CBS used to drive me fucking crazy. On its shows, they'd say, OK, the scene takes place in the Senate offices. I'd say, OK. They say, got to have an establishing shot of Washington. I'd say, where else would the Senate offices be? Nope, got to have an establishing shot. I'd say, OK, put in an establishing-- put in an establishing shot. I'd look at it on TV. It's an establishing shot and superimposed over the capitol building-- superimposed is what-- Washington d.c. DC. What? Who is this for the benefit of, right? A, it matters that it's in a room with a bunch of fat white guys who look like senators. We'll assume it's the Senate, right? B, where would the Senate be, even if it's not in Washington, DC? Is that going to help anybody understand the scene, right? Right? They're fat corporate types. So I did my first movie, House of Games. And we shot it in Seattle. And the guys who released it-- I think a guy called Orion, a guy called Bill Bernstein. And he says, you have to have an establishing shot. I say, why? He said, well, how will people know it's Seattle? I said, it's not important it's Seattle. It's a city. ...

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Comments

EK T.

I disagree on the establishing shot. As a viewer, I always want to know "what city".

Glenna A.

I find all of Mamet's lectures inspiring and challenging. To cut the crap, produce something that can stand on its merit. We all know that less is more but lots of vamping can get in the way. I find his style of teaching informative. I like his bottom line approach.

STEVEN B.

David, for someone who speaks a lot about cutting out unneeded points and dialogue you tend to do a lot of rambling. For example, do we really need to know the actor's names in a play or film you wrote? No, we would understand the point you are making without this information and the sentence would have less clutter in it because no one is going to remember the actor's names.

Michael U.

Paring back a story to its essentials is a great idea. I agree with Mamet that a lot of narration in movies is used to cover up a weak story. Now I am off to watch some of my favorite movies with no sound on and see how they hold up.

David M.

Best course ever. I think Mr. Mamet is a cynic that understands the heart, and by this I really mean story. He's on a mission to get rid of all that gets in the way of this. I could have this wrong; I just know it's advice that's perfect for me to work with right now.

Mike E.

"If it were holding your attention, you wouldn't go get the beer". Not true. I've seen people get up and leave the room in the middle of cinematic masterpieces. A good film cannot hold the attention of someone used to watching Michael Bay films, no matter how well-written.

Mike E.

Re: Establishing shots; Pulp Fiction has almost none. No exteriors of the car they're in; no exteriors of the drug dealer's house. Because they would add nothing, I presume.

J.J. A.

My team and I are always talking about overly narrated scripts that come across our desks. Love this!

Genevieve S.

BEST MASTER CLASS EVER. (Okay. Maybe David is tied with Steve Martin.) All Master Class teachers are good at their craft, but not all are good speakers. David, Steve, Shonda...great delivery and indispensable instruction! I’m in love with them all.

Dazelle S.

I love cilantro and kale...lol. Narration...Exposition. "Fix it in the script."