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Plot

David Mamet

Lesson time 16:14 min

Plot is paramount. Become familiar with the essential ingredients of a plot like the precipitating event and the second-act problem. Learn how to find the plot hiding behind your scenes.

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Plot is all that there is. That's all that there is. As I say the perfect example is the joke. There's nothing in the joke that does not tend toward the punchline. Anything in the joke that does not tend toward the punchline kills the joke. And if you talk to comedy writers in LA, they have a saying among themselves. What do you do all week long? I'm in there shaving syllables. They're taking out extra syllables. I wanted to tell a joke, but all the jokes I know are filthy. So I got to think if I can come up with a joke that's either clean enough to tell without breaking the camera, or insufficiently Jewish so that it might redound to the benefit of a wider audience. Tick, tock, tick, tock, tick, tock. This is me thinking. A guy is marooned on a desert island with, let us say, Jessica Chastain. And they're there for months, and months, a guy and Jessica Chastain. They become very good friends. They know they're going to be there for years. They become intimate. After a while, he gets up one morning, he says, Jessica, would you do me a favor? He said, would you put on my clothes? So she says, OK. He says, I'm going to take a little bit of burnt cork from the fire, and kind of stipple in a beard on you. Would you do that? She says, yeah sure. He says, would you mind walking down the beach with me? So they're walking down the beach, and he says, at one point, they're walking, and he says, I'm sleeping with Jessica Chastain. So, everything in the joke tends toward the punchline. It's a guy, that's all we have to know. A banker, a football player, a movie-- it doesn't make any difference. A desert island, we get it. It's a desert island. They're there for a long time. We get it. We can put in-- as an amateur would, he brings her a rose and she then-- who cares? Everything tends toward the punchline. That's what a plot is. If it doesn't tend toward the punch line, take it out. There are a lot of plays that have a title of a present participle. Being, going, achieving, feeling, blah, blah, blah. Present participle is an ongoing action. Something-- that makes a terrible play. Except for being there, it's a dead giveaway that you're looking at something that hasn't quite fought enough. A play has to have a precipitating event before which the play didn't exist. And the precipitating event has to inspire the hero on a goal, a journey, that has a specific end. At the end of which, the question which is raised at the beginning, is answered. Either in the positive or the negative. So Aristotle says-- Oedipus says, I'm going to find out the cause of the plague on Thebes. He becomes King, that's the precipitating event. I want to find out the cause of the plague on Thebes. At the end he finds out he's the cause. The play's over. We've stated a proposi...


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Rixanne (Rikki) H.

I so love listening to him. His depth of knowledge and raw honesty that smarts sometimes, this is real learning.

John S.

The best definition of plot I've heard is: Plot is the succession of obstacles that the hero faces that are of increasing magnitude.

Rosemary D.

Very interesting. How to get over the confessional and find a motivation in which the character actually does rise above it all.

Joshua D.

Interestingly, the original Octopus short story by the brilliant Ted Chiang "Stories of your Life" is mostly about the process of learning how to speak octopus. Easier to sell a smart idea to a sci fi short fiction crowd than a studio maybe?

Shelley

I have an issue with the idea that we are not to manipulate the audience, (from the previous lesson) Isn't that, in effect, what we do? Not in a negative sense, but presumably an audience comes to the theatre neutral. They don't know what to expect from the play and they sit in their seats and wait. The playwright wants to move them in some way; make them angry, sad, regretful, disturbed and he/she does it by creating a story that, in a way, persuades or seduces the audience to feel. Isn't that a form of manipulation? I do enjoy some of Mamet's references, i.e., to the Yetzer Harah in character and this idea of the hero/heroine's journey. I'm a big Campbell fan and resonate to his particular definition of myth. Love what he says about the misery in writing a plot. My nemesis in writing. But I'm glad he found it for American Buffalo; it's one of my favorite plays.

EK T.

It took me a while, but I got it. it's the thinking. it's trying to speak octopus that keeps me from tackling those "pain-in-the-butt" scenes.

Ramelle

Now I know what to grapple with to start my story. I'll be back - hopefully soon!

Patricia D.

I am blown away. This is such incredibly good and clear teaching. I get it. I am good at writing scenes but to have the thread, the plot, to know what to cut and what to keep... it has never been this clear to me. Thank-you, David.

Maricha K.

In a round about way he gets the message across. Suppose that's how genius works.

STEVEN B.

Drama is not a joke and it holds so much more of the human mentality than a joke does. I dislike the approach of comparing a joke and drama because they are different things and in the vast realm of entertainment can connotate so much more than a joke, so no plot isn't all there is. For example, ask someone what did they like about the film and they may say the characters or dialogue or camera work. I dislike the plot of Iron Man 3 but love the character of Iron Man. We shouldn't discount all these other factors that create a screenplay and a film because it is ignorance to so many things people love about a good story.