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Case Study: Grey's Anatomy Pilot - Part 2

Shonda Rhimes

Lesson time 14:29 min

Shonda continues to break down the Grey's Anatomy pilot act-by-act.

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These twists-- the mom reveal, Derek picking Meredith to work with them, George's patient dies-- do you put a mandatory amount of twists into it, or do you think ahead of the twists, or do you just try to let them come naturally when you're writing a pilot, or even writing any episode of the show? I think the reason why I think about act breaks is because it allows you to think something big needs to happen at the end of every act. It allows you to not get stale. It allows you to think I have to be building towards some piece of story turn every act break. That way you're not staying steady, stable, nothing's really going on. And I've seen a lot of people try to make something exciting happen at the end of an act just for excitement's sake, and you can't do that. It has to actually have been placed, planted, and build from there. You need to plant something and then pay it off. You can't just have, ooh, suddenly the hospital explodes for no reason. You really need to plant things so that when these things happen we are watching character growth. And if it's built in character, you can get away with almost anything. Trust me, we have, at the hospital. But if you really build it in character, if you make it about character, you'll buy a lot of goodwill, and people will buy anything. Going back to the characters' back stories, because we see Meredith's secret at the end, that her home life is-- her mom has Alzheimer's and she visits her in the nursing home, do you have an idea for the other characters about what their home life is when you write the pilot? So for Grey's, I really did. For Grey's, I did a lot of work. It was my first time out doing this kind of thing, and I really wanted to know as much as I could. And so for Grey's, I knew who George was. I knew that he came from this big family. I knew that he was from Seattle. Cristina, I knew that she was from Beverly Hills, and I knew that her mother had married this guy and she had a sister. I knew that Izzie was from a trailer park. I knew everything about these people, and I'd worked really hard at it. I remember when Burke finally says, "My mother owns a restaurant in Alabama." It's a big line for us on the show, because I had been walking around saying that for, like, a year and a half. And people were like, "Why do you keep saying that?" And I was like, I don't know. It's just very important. Burke's mother owns a restaurant in Alabama. It's stuff like that. Those details were very important for me, and they were very internalized. I noticed when I was reading through the pilot of Grey's Anatomy that there were several omitted scenes. And I was just curious, which scenes do you find get cut the most? Is it that kind of back story, things that feel needless once you start to go into breaking the actual story? And it might be different from Grey's Anatomy from other...


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Dorothee

Hi everybody! I'm enjoying the class a a lot. I especially like all the practical tips and instruments (for example the beat sheet). In Germany it's rather hard to come by practical "tools" / courses on writing, except when you apply to one of the few film schools. This might sound stupid but I find it kind of hard to maintain the correct structure/format of the script, f.ex. when to change scenes, what to put in the "Action" text, what to leave out completely and leave to the director etc. Does anyone know where I can download something like a blank script incl. the most important rules? Right now I'm comparing it to the pilots we can download here. I'm just worried that I will write a script and send it to a "Script doc" and the whole format will be wrong, if I send somehting in I hope to discuss ideas not format :-) Looking foward to your responses! Thanks, Dorothee

Kimberly M.

I loved it. The introduction, act breaks information is helpful. Also, the build up, planting things to happen, not just making things happen.

Dee

It was wonderful. I liked her framing of not copying something that has been done. Create your own dilemma or secrets about your character.

Magdaline F.

Character growth and story turns with act breaks. GREAT lesson!!!!! Got it. Thanks Shonda.

EK T.

Good questions by the on-screen participants. They ask questions in a way that the listener gets the point of the discussion without having to go back and review the show, although reviewing episodes and putting them in the context of the conversation is interesting as well.

EK T.

Great session. Looking forward to catching up on some episodes for context.

Mark C.

This really is amazing stuff. I have a few ideas on various topics and while this may not be on direct point, there are so many things that you can pull out of this that is just great.

Desheila

I’m so much more confident that I have this road map of breaking down acts. I’m not flopping around in the sand now. I’m standing on solid ground with tools I can use to create and build a pilot with practical knowledge as my guide. That’s big and freeing for me.

Tabitha F.

How brilliant how Shonda went from war journalists to science and the medical world. I have drawn inspiration and realized how having a show based off of airports and life that goes on around that atmosphere. Seems like a lot of story lines could be created.

Lemonhead

So amazing how much thought goes into this and how enlightening it is to hear her talk about it!