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Writing

Editing

James Patterson

Lesson time 9:04 min

James is liberal with a red pen; his editing is key to keeping the reader engaged. Learn how to trim the fat with our interactive editing assignment.

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For me and for a lot of writers, and I think for most of you, editing, polishing-- and I'm talking about what you're doing yourself, not when the book gets to a publishing house. It's the whole ball of wax. It's not writing. It's rewriting, and it's rewriting, and it's rewriting. I like to do many drafts. I've done as many as nine or ten drafts. But I do the drafts very quickly. I don't get constipated. I Don't get worried. I just keep going. I just-- let's do it again, let's do it again, let's do it again. And this has been true whether I'm writing a 400-page book or when I was in advertising, doing a 30-second television spot. Write it again, write it again, write it again. Look at it sideways. Look at it upside down. Turn it around. There's nothing wrong. You should be considering every possibility. The rewriting-- there's so many different pieces of it. There is the getting a story even better, getting those chapters closer to where you want them to be. You might do that a couple times-- might be two months, a month and a month, where you just work on the chapters. Or it may be a two or three-month thing where you just work on just getting that scene right. And the first rewrite, I might just be trying to get those chapters, that story, to be more coherent, clearer, just trying to make sure I really got the heart of it correctly. And that's very important. That's the most important thing. Once again, it's always that same thing of moving the story and characterization forward. And if you keep simple things like that in your head, and I repeat them, but you should repeat them for the rest of your writing life, because that's all it is. And it's unbelievable how quickly you forget that, because there you are in your writing, and it's not happening. And you're not realizing that to it's the rewriting and rewriting and the rewriting, and remembering those things about what am I trying to do? Trying to hold the reader. And that's it. I mean, you may get so good that that's just an automatic, but I don't know if that happens with many writers. And that's why you'll find certain writers where every other book seems to be a dud. It seems like they kind of forget it for a whole book. And that happens. I mean, I don't know if I forgotten it for a whole book, but I've certainly forgotten it for sections. But then I'll read it, and go, like, man this sucks. This is just not happening. OK, what did I do wrong here? And invariably the big thing I did wrong was I'm not moving the thing forward. It's sitting there for 40 pages, just sitting there. That does not work-- doesn't work for the reader. What happened? It sat there, sat there for 50 pages. No, story can't sit there. [MUSIC PLAYING] Consider not polishing the book until you've written it, at least one draft. Because if ...


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James Patterson, the author of 19 consecutive No. 1 New York Times bestsellers, reveals his tricks of the trade. In his first online writing class, he guides you from the start to the finish of your book.



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Excellent, through provoking, motivating. I found the class useful in every aspect of my writing.

Thank you Mr. Patterson! I do not get to be outrageous in real life. At least not on purpose. Perhaps now I can in my writing : ) What fun. Thank you!

I loved the instructor's style. His passion for writing and storytelling came through. With each successive lesson, I was joyfully motivated to keep on writing and believe that I could do it well. Thank you!

It is like sitting in a room with an accomplished writer. James is very personable and he is comfortable with speaking in this forum, so it's like sitting down and learning from the best.


Comments

Jason S.

Where did the Delete-O-Matic go? AT the stage where I really need this now....

Dorothy E.

Great (and much needed!) advice for me on editing. Most valuable: stay positive and remember "you didn't make mistakes, you're just making it better." A close second is to wait to polish the language until the last pass. (Although Dean Koontz says he rewrites each page until he feels it's perfect before moving on, sometimes up to 30 rewrites. Guess it boils down to whatever works for you.)

Ashe W.

He is just so hilarious. So true about getting to the end without fussing over individual lines because you might have to "cut those F***ers out!" ...Classic. I love now having his no-nonsense voice in my head as I'm editing.

Debi

This opened my eyes to start paying more attention to the books I read. I think I've already got a good sense of this, but I''l pay attention even more now! Thanks JP

A fellow student

I now read books differently as I compare what I have learned to the mechanics that authors used

Michael S.

When thinking about editing , should I write more than I intend to in order to leave room for editing? To clarify , when i was taking a class for web content, the advise was to cut our half of what you wrote and then cut that in half. Because less is more. So in a 400 page novel your first draft would be 1600 pages.

Ian C.

I love that: keep moving it forward. It's a good mantra to keep in mind and over the desk! If it's not relevant to contributing and building the story depth, drop it otherwise I might frustrate the reader. Eliminate everything that distracts. "Pace pays the electric bills!" Thanks James - great advice indeed.

A fellow student

Hugely helpful. Am in the middle of a rewrite with producers tapping their foot to hurry up. James, you've been terrifically helpful, exceedingly powerful with your simplicity. Thank you,.. (whale nudging from me:-)))

Mia M.

In the PDF for this lesson, when I clink the link to the "Delete-o-Matic" tool, it brings be back to this page. Where is the tool?

Lee

Certainly agree full hardheartedly with Mr Patterson editing and rewriting is the key to the formulating the novel or screenplay for submission or development.