From Margaret Atwood's MasterClass

Crafting Dialogue

Margaret teaches how to use dialogue to reveal character and story, and discusses the importance of making your dialogue authentic to the time and place in which your narrative transpires.

Topics include: "Real Life Conversation vs. Dialogue • Dialogue Is Subjective • Know Your Characters’ Vernacular • Dialogue in Alias Grace"

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Margaret teaches how to use dialogue to reveal character and story, and discusses the importance of making your dialogue authentic to the time and place in which your narrative transpires.

Topics include: "Real Life Conversation vs. Dialogue • Dialogue Is Subjective • Know Your Characters’ Vernacular • Dialogue in Alias Grace"

Margaret Atwood

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If you're going to have your characters talking to one another, it should be for some reason, not just to have them chattering away. When people talk, there's usually quite a lot of padding and verbiage, pauses and ums and uhs and you know and like, a lot of stuffing in the conversation like that. And if you put all of that into a book, it can get either unintentionally comical or very boring. So dialogues in books are much, much more selective. And they're usually trying to find out something from the other person or they're making some social move. They're making some power play of a social nature or trying to ingratiate themselves, or they may even be attempting to be seductive. So how people talk and what they say in a book is indicative of who they are, of course. It has to be consistent with who they are. But it's also telling the reader things that the reader needs to know, but most particularly, what their intention is in talking to this other character. What are they trying to achieve? What is their goal? And what are they trying to avoid? [MUSIC PLAYING] What people say to one another and what they're thinking while they're saying those things may be quite different. What the person listening hears, what they understand by what the first person has said, which can be something like, that person is trying to be quite rude to me although, they've put it in a polite way. I get it that they're being dismissive and condescending to me. You can do it like that. You can hear a veiled threat. For instance, you can hear some information that the first person wasn't intending to give you. Maybe they're attempting to be seductive and the other person just thinks they're an idiot. All of these can happen. Pickup lines-- what the person says, what the recipient hears, those can be two quite different things. It might be fun sometimes to have to have your character overhearing two other people. So that's another kind of use of dialogue, an overheard dialogue. And if you do that, usually the person doing the overhearing is either learning a secret or hearing something quite unpleasant about themselves, so that experience people may have had in wash rooms, say, wash rooms in high school about overhearing other people discussing you behind your back. Because it is true in society in general that people will say things about you behind your back that they would not say to your face. [MUSIC PLAYING] It's hard to speak about someone's tone of voice or their voice apart from what's happening to them and who they are. So you need to know who they are. You need to know where they're living, what their social level is, what sort of vocabulary would be available to them, how they talk. What's their level of speech? What is their local dialect? I just watched a film called "Bad Grannies." I see these on planes. So they're all talking southern-- southern dialect, and they're putting in a lot of vernacular expressions because th...

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Comments

Sam

Sometimes I feel like I have too much dialogue going on in my writing, but this lesson has helped me decide what dialogue should stay and what is irrelevant to the story

Gareth S.

I love dialogue. Dialogue seems to be the most important part of my writing.

G. S.

Who they are, where they live, their education is how the dialogue should be!

G. S.

1. Overhearing can be fun! Hearing something unpleasant about themselves beacuse it is true!

Suzanne B.

I love dialogue. My first love was reading plays, Tennessee Williams to be exact. Why? because his realities were close to mine growing up and I couldn't find anything close in the literature that was offered to me. I was 15 going on 35 and, once safely installed in boarding school, I was free to roam in my mind. I wound up with TW. So when my narrative starts to slow down and I begin to struggle, I often think, hey, she's been awfully quiet. Let's check in.

Craig H.

I feel lucky that dialogue is one of my strengths. Still have a lot to learn, but it flows from my fingers more easily than description, etc. I hear the conversations fairly clearly in my head. Plus, I've had a fair number of years listening to people speak, taking note of word usage and accent, etc. But my big takeaway here was to think about what's not being said, or not intended to be said, etc. I look at some recent dialogue I've written and see it might be too facile, too open, without subtext. Well, back to the drawing board!

Elizabeth M.

Dialogue seems to be the most difficult part of my writing. I find it difficult to know when to infuse dialogue into first person narrative, etc... When and why do we add dialogue vs narrative? How much dialogue? Don't want the story to be one running conversation, etc...

Diana H.

I listen to people and their vernacular, dialect, and inflection all the time. I do it inspite of myself. When I hear something I like I copy it down in my memory. I remember entire conversations. To find the characterization again I use the stories they told. When spending time on Shakespeare you are so often unlocking the language so you can glean all the nuance it is sort of a game and a challenge for an actor or an audience. I have not experimented much with vastly different era's. I will do that for homework .

Wendy F.

I have a Canadian informant who reads my chapters as I go along, and she reminds me of how Anglicised my writing has become. My novel is set in Toronto, where we grew up, and I was moved from there as a teenager in the 80s and returned for a short time in the 90s (a long story, not for today - perhaps a creative non-fiction waiting to be told). It’s very helpful to have another take, and good to remember that Margaret Atwood also teaches us to focus on detail like this. She is marvellous in so many ways!

J'nee H.

I watched the link from the workbook and found the impact of the original Shakespearian linguistics fascinating! I happen to be an American living as an expat in Hong Kong and on a daily basis hear various accents and a blending of terminologies that is such a hoot. The taxi drivers laugh at my Cantonese and sometimes I need to listen a couple of times to understand their English. Now to capture that down in my writing will be interesting! The devil will be in the details from British terms like mobile phone (vs. US. cell) to lift (vs elevator.) Could be quite fun!