Film & TV
Lesson time 8:35 min
In a study of a scene from Steve Jobs, Aaron explains how high stakes, strong intentions & obstacles, and competing tactics make for an exciting scene to write.
Topics include: Steve Jobs' intention and obstacle • Writing description
We're there? Hey, Chris. Hey, Andy. How are you doing? Terrible. You guys caught up now? Excuse me for saying hello to my friend, who thinks you're a dick. I don't think you're-- We're there. No. It's got a one in six chance of working. God damn it. We're not a pit crew at Daytona, this is can't be fixed in seconds. You didn't have seconds. You had three weeks. The universe was created in a third of that time. Well, someday you'll have to tell us how you did it. Here's what I'm going to do, I'm going to announce the names of everyone who designed the launch demo. I'm going to introduce everyone and ask them to stand up. The bag was designed by Susan Kare. The Macintosh font that's scrolling across the screen was designed by Steve Capps. The Starry Night and Skywriting was Bruce Horn. MacPaint, MacWrite, Alice, down to the calculator. And then I'm going to say the voice demo that didn't work was designed by Andy Hertzfeld. Steve-- Five and six is your chance of surviving the first round of Russian Roulette, you reverse those odds. So unless you want to be disgraced in front of your friends, family, colleagues, stockholders, and the press, I wouldn't stand here arguing. I'd go try and get some more bullets out of the gun. Do it, Andy. I like this scene. It's the first act scene with Steve and Andy Hertzfeld. Andy Hertzfeld can't make the voice demo work, and Steve threatens him by saying, listen I'm going to introduce everybody who had everything to do with this. And I'm going to get to the voice demo, and I'm going to say it was Andy Hertzfeld, and it's not going to work, and you're going to be humiliated in front of everybody. I should tell you that the idea for the scene came from Andy Hertzfeld. In an email exchange, I just asked him, in this situation tell me what would happen. What would be Steve's reaction? And he said he would say, he would say what happened. You'll get bored of hearing the word "conflict," you'll get bored of hearing "intention" and "obstacle," but the scene works because the conflict is clear, because the intention and obstacle is clear. Writing intention and obstacle with Steve was fun because of his famous reality distortion field, which is to say that to Steve there was no such thing as an insurmountable obstacle. Someone-- an expert-- can say what you're describing is impossible, and Steve would say do it anyway, or in this case, I'm going to embarrass you. So clear intention and obstacle, it revealed a lot about Steve. Remember you don't want to tell the audience who a character is, you want to show the audience what a character wants. And we do that with Steve. What he wants at that moment is for the voice demo to work. So Steve's tactic is to threaten Andy with humiliation out there. Remember, there are people watching this scene, too, not just what'...
Aaron Sorkin wrote his first movie on cocktail napkins. Those napkins turned into A Few Good Men, starring Jack Nicholson. Now, the Academy Award-winning writer of The West Wing and The Social Network is teaching screenwriting. In this class, you’ll learn his rules of storytelling, dialogue, character development, and what makes a script actually sell. By the end, you’ll write screenplays that capture your audience’s attention.
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