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The West Wing Writers' Room: Part 3

Aaron and the students continue to work together to break episode 501 of The West Wing.

Topics include: Virtual writers' room

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Aaron and the students continue to work together to break episode 501 of The West Wing.

Topics include: Virtual writers' room

Aaron Sorkin

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OK, so I want to hear from you guys. I just want to hear your off the top of your head, unformed, bad ideas. OK? This is the time now for bad ideas. And feel free to reach outside the box. There is no reason-- we've done this several times on the show. And I like it when we do. There's no reason why this episode has to begin 2 minutes after the last episode. It can. That was my first thought. It can begin five years ago. It can be a flashback episode. If we hadn't done it already, and we've done it twice, you could cut back and forth between the campaign when everything's great to now when everything is terrible. But we did that with the top of season 2 with [INAUDIBLE]. Let me hear from you guys. What do you think so far? I have two intertwined story lines. So one of them is related to Zoe's boyfriend waking up and CJ and the West Wing crew finding out that his drug dealer is basically linked to this white supremacist group of, like, Christian fundamentalists. And they're trying to resurrect this group called the Covenant, the Sword, and the Arm of the Lord. And so they're basically-- That's a real group. That's a real group that basically went defunct in the '80s. So these are basically young Christian fundamentalists who supposedly have kidnapped Zoe. But they don't know yet that she's been kidnapped. They just know that this might be a link that I think Nancy McNally had alluded to at the end of season 4. So that's the information that they have right now is that they have this drug dealer. There's a supremacist group that he's linked to. And maybe they have Zoe. And then the other story is linked to John Goodman's character as the acting president. And the Qumari terrorists, or Bahji operatives. Have basically sent a video to the White House claiming responsibility for Zoe's kidnapping. And the footage basically shows a captured girl, who kind of resembles Zoe. But they can't confirm for sure that it actually is her. But going off of this video basically that is not leaked to the press yet, Leo and Glenn Allen Walken and the situation room, basically, are forced to decide whether or not to storm the place, because the CIA is located-- they pinpointed where this place is, where they shot the footage and where Zoe might be located. So the question is whether or not to stage this rescue mission, which may very well incite a war between Qumar, which is a US ally at the moment in order to save the president's daughter. There's a lot of interesting stuff in there. But I'm confused about one thing. They've got footage of someone who's going to turn out to not be Zoe. Right? Yes. But based on where this footage was shot, they were able to somehow recognize this place, which I buy. If anybody has seen the movie The Good Shepherd-- Yes. In that movie, there is-- and this is talking about te...

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Aaron Sorkin wrote his first movie on cocktail napkins. Those napkins turned into A Few Good Men, starring Jack Nicholson. Now, the Academy Award-winning writer of The West Wing and The Social Network is teaching screenwriting. In this class, you’ll learn his rules of storytelling, dialogue, character development, and what makes a script actually sell. By the end, you’ll write screenplays that capture your audience’s attention.

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Andre E.

Confidential ...For your Eyes Only Trailer for Ian 2.0 Preface and Driving Inspiration. ..Being an avid reader of Ian Fleming Books and Film Adaptations of James Bond 007, I thought about first understanding, then righting the wrongs about this Storyline and the underlying Premises of Brass Knuckles, Intimacy Avoidance and who are the Good Guys really. I have been to Beppu in Japan, visited Ian Flemings Hideout Firefly in Jamaica, seen all his 007, read many of the Books by Fleming..and am awed by the strenght of the Franchise. After my life as an Attorney, I studied Life Ccoaching in Califiornia and most of my beliefs are turned topsy turvy after 9=11, after David Ike, (show 007 watching David Ike...lol).. I imagined that James Bond was getting older, reminisced, questionned his choices now and again and kind of was my Coaching Client and looked at reinventing himself. The underlying themes of the Movie is ''All you have is your Soul'' https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CoNtYC_XDC8 and has Tracy Chapman s Song as one of the Melodies.Also ''Born to Die'' a Lana del Rey by Angelina Jordan https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DNU-HcLuO_I played while I wrote this. I kind of ''channelled'' the Human Side of 007...so the auxiliary surface themes, peripheral themes of the movie are ''Human trafficking...every year xxxxxxxx kids disappear yearly '' , Human Transformation , the Deep State , and the transgender phenomena in a non judgemental way (ladyboy phenomena in Thailand). Location of main scenes. Glasgow U Convocation.. Bangkok, Thailand Plantations of Georgia or Louisiana Thailand Island of Ko Tao Japan Beppu ...flashbacks of James Bond Healing Forest Search of Missing Boy..flashbacks Swiss Alps..why there? Because the Money is there and it s beautiful..could be filmed in the Canadian Rockies,,also I like the idea of mixing Darkness and Light, Cold and Heat, Good and Evil , Physical Strength vs Real Heart Power, like the Painter I am. The quest of the Character that we all know is stirred at the Convocation when he runs in to his Paramour Ms Shagamotto and listens to the Convocation Speech of this Asian telecom Wiz-CEO who is a trans..turns out to be his son, abducted in his youth. It turns out that James Bond , after his son got abducted, attended Glasgow U but abandoned his studies to become an Agent , and follow the school of Hard knocks to become one of the top Agents M16. Recognizing his Japanese Paramour at the Convocation that he met in Beppu, Japan 35+ years ago stirs his Doubts and he decides to follow his Inner Voice and track the boy to the other side of the World. Bond was taken to his Convocation to accept an Honorary Doctorate or because his best friend s son is graduating. In his quest that takes him from Glasgow to Thailand to Japan to the Alps and ends in the southern USA, , Bond addresses his youth, flashbacks to his trauma and why he became Intimacy avoidant...lol. ..like many of us (its a social epidemic) , A Fractured Man in a fractured world...lol. .I like to go Deep. This may be in the movie but may be dealt in the movie only superficially due to lack of time. Bond also questions the Asian ethic and rise in Power and the idea of a Unipolar World that he has served so far. He realizes that there are other Truths out there than that imposed by M16. The Movie ends with Bond reconciling with his son , err daughter and going back to School to finish his degree and the Movie has two possible outcomes...a dead end one or the intro of his succesor, possibly his son err daughter, (when Sissies become the real heroes,) that he befriends at Glasgow U...keep the door open for a Sequel...lol..Sequel Money as says Steve Martin. Also, I am not clear if this should be all straight face or a spoof of the franchise like Sorkin meets Steve Martin ...a hybrid of sorts in a world of hybrid everythings. Hey, all that the two share in common initially is Good scotch. I think that this story could have Legs and traction..If you believe so, I am open to collaborate with you to make it happen. It s your Call. I am in your Masterclass and like your Approach and the treatment of the 007 topic by sane eyes, with a more human side appeals to me and I think it could appeal to many of his Fans. The question is if this should be a Broccolino 007 or a new Brand , just influenced by 007, as Austin Powers did. I have talked to nobody aboutb this story idea and am sending you this because I trust you. To your Greatness. PS. I like the Idea of Being the Change you want to see. Namaste Andre Ewert in Shawinigan, Qc https://www.facebook.com/andremtl123 Love Life Loud and Clear

A fellow student

I was all in until Sorkin went Hollywood Trumpbashing. Took the cheap shot so I bailed out. I didn't buy Masterclass for political ideology.

A fellow student

To see different types of ideas being analyzed and debated is very good. Some things can be combined, others discarded and changed a little bit. Ittakes brainstorming to come up with something good for a team.

Usha D.

When all characters are talking and dealing with each other the season is at its best.

A fellow student

I found it very valuable. A writers group gets you motivated to step out of the box and challenge yourself.

Judith M.

You might have wanted the hospital to confirm it was in fact ecstasy and not an opioid slipped to the boyfriend, because then they could have used Narcan.

Judith M.

Both Ronald Reagan (once) and George W. Bush (twice), transferred power under the 25th Section 3, with a written declaration, they both took power back again by submitting a second declaration 'to the contrary'. Just as you showed in the episode with him holding both. A cliffhanger for the end of the series leaving doubt in our minds as to whether he would take his place back again. Geolocation profiling is often used by Criminal profilers in different organizations so would be easy for the FBI to field. You could certainly have a profiler arrive at the Whitehouse to integrate with the Secret Service, giving cut scenes with them opposite the investigation. Insisting on video footage being posted to a set site would also allow a further level of tracking to help narrow it down. The kidnappers showed knowledge of low tech by using the polaroids which of course avoid the digital camera picture stamps or phone GPS locators. They made a mistake by using handwriting. Run a digital search on driving license and Passport signatures, then cross check with known ATF rapturists (if you wished to keep them or the covenanters in.) Obvious conflict - the planes. Use a plane that is breaking all the rules of the stand in President to get Zoey out of the country. Does one president end up killing the daughter of the other, or do the team put together the subtle clues just in time.

Lisa

Edith Wilson was President Woodrow Wilson's second wife. She did run things after he suffered a stroke. I don't think Bartlett's wife could get away with this now, but it's definitely worth a mention from Toby or Josh. President Reagan was reinstated after taking the 25th by signing a letter given to him by his Chief of Staff, so it may be as simple as that.

Maros M.

I like the interaction with the students/participants... felt natural and easy going yet still handling tasks and debating.. Also good take away points of - getting out of the well, how, do not cheat audience of that... Thank you.

Anastacia S.

Some rambling thoughts: Open with President Walken at his desk in the Oval Office, jarring the audience and his/Bartlet’s staff with the unexpected vision of not Barlet at the desk. Walken needs to be given an opportunity to make good on his threat to be a hard ass and jeopardize Zoey’s life and safe return in the interest of national security, also thereby presenting the staff with a reason to later betray Walken in loyalty to Bartlet, as Aaron suggested. Since the show took such a dark turn when Agent Molly was found in the alley with a bullet between her eyes (and why wasn’t an agent posted at a back door to a nightclub?), the kidnappers can’t be just some guys from Jersey who want ransom money and are keeping Zoey in the back of a chop shop. There has to be a connection with Qumar. Even though Jean Paul wanted Zoey to take the Ecstasy, he can only turn out to be a pawn in the kidnapping, as he has no motive. (As an aside, at the end of this dark episode, even the theme music seemed out of place and too lighthearted.) Whatever the political demands of the kidnappers, they can be communicated to President Walken in the presence of Josh and Toby, so that Walken makes the decision that jeopardizes and practically eliminates the possibility of Zoey’s safe return. E.g., Walken receives a call from the monarch of Qumar, who reveals his country’s involvement in the kidnapping and requests the money that had been part of the demands sought before the Mastico was turned around, in exchange for Zoey’s return; Walken flatly denies the monarch’s request and rejects negotiating with Qumar as a terrorist nation (which ironically also has an alliance with the hypocritical U.S.). The monarch then threatens to behead Zoey. who is “only a woman, out getting drunk at a nightclub, which she shouldn’t have been doing.” Josh and Toby leave Walken’s office and discuss who is going to tell Bartlet about this dire turn of events. As a new father, Toby is elected to tell Bartlet. This news could bring on an extreme M.S. episode, with Bartlet deemed unable return to office, and Zoey could die. If Bartlet does return, Zoey will need to come back. as Aaron suggested; otherwise Bartlet’s character on the show would suffer an unrecoverable setback. However, since Sam Seaborn was a sine qua non on TWW, and after his departure there was a hole in the fabric of the show and an incomplete troupe, if Bartlet doesn’t return to office, Zoey would become the second ghost on the show. If Bartlet does return to office, Zoey would be tracked down within a few miles of the White House, using the methods Aaron suggested (sounds, etc. in the background when Zoey is put on the phone to prove she is still alive) and a dramatic “extraction” would take place, with the attendant emotional reunion with her parents, and then, with Charlie. Happily ever after.